If you're back to give me a hand with this - thank you so very much! I know how tiring it can be to go over and over someone's query with them but I also know how exciting it can be when they finally get there.
I'm not saying this is there yet, but I have tried to cut it down, clear it out, and inject some voice. I got so much great advice the first time around and if you guys have the time, I'd love feedback on this one too.
Is it better? Worse? Are there still some things I'm missing or adding that I shouldn't? Or has this query completely gone stale?
I don't know. Which is why I need you.